October Girl

This post is amazing, you have a great imaganation. I think that this might be some of the best work I've seen in a couple of weeks, whihc is good, ...

Hello, the name of this poem drew me in right away I HAD to read it. But I disliked how it ended. The last stanza was hard to read and ...

Suzanne, This poem didn't exactly hit me, I didn't feel much emotion coming from it. The title of it made me think, but it didn't shout out to me BRILLIANT! ...

I love this Angel, you were brillant! You're not forcing the rythem or the ryme I'm really proud of you. This piece is perfect. You put alot of emotion into ...

I feel like I've read this before, I feel so moved by it though, great job Angel. I can really feel a great vibe coming from this piece as if, ...

Hello darling, I completely love this post because it's got a great name and rythem. I enjoyed it all the way to the end. So sweet and passionate. This is ...

Ross, This story is great, but I think you should make it a bit shorter-I mean you can leave it the way it is if you want but breaking it ...

Hmm, what to say? This poem was actually pretty good. As you said you needed to just get this out and let it be heard, and I heard you loud ...

This poem is ok, but it could be improved on, sorry dear. But this is just the truth. I'm suck in the middle of do I like it, or do ...

This was AMAZING.... I'm completely breathless.... Wow, so moving. The emotions and the passion is just so..... real.... I'm actually wondering right now if my eyes are deciving me, this ...

Oh, Gosh it sounds like a fairy-tale gone bad. But in other words I loved it, you learn fast. It sounds like it could be expanded, and I have a ...

Hey, OE-I don't mean to sound harsh but I think you need to break this up. Like three lin es or four then hit enter twice and start with the ...

Oh!!!! I love it already. Great job Ross! The perfect start at a chapter you left the reader hanging on the edge great job. I'm not going to point out ...

Hi! Anyways *clears throat* I loved the poem but hated how it kept repeating-no offence but it kind of got annoying. The reader will understand you're sitting in a sea ...

Hi, Ross! What to say? Well, it left me breatheless there's a start. It's so true, and the truth hurts but it is true. I love this! If someone didn't ...